Archive for July, 2007

Hey there

Thursday, July 26th, 2007

So, I really should update my blog, no?

 It’s so shameful having nothing to say… I’m working on polishing a partial for an agent, but mostly I’ve been busy setting up and transfering files on to my brand new laptop.  It’s so shiny and gorgeous!

Being female, I had the desperate urge to accessorise it as soon as I purchased it, and rushed out to buy to cutest little cherry-red micro-mouse you’ve ever seen, a new USB stick (after I discovered my original had nearly 4,000 files on it) in a matching shade of red and a rather nifty little USB powered LED clip-on light.

*Happy Sigh*

I’m on Vista, and Office 2007, so I’ve got a lot of learning to do, but I’m enough of a nerd to love new gadgets and learning, so that’s fine.

 And…. wait for it….. *fanfare*  this weekend we’re going CAMPING!!!

 It’s been far, far too long since we’ve been camping.  I can’t wait.

And where are we going?  We’re going here.

Weather Changeable

Thursday, July 19th, 2007

There are great big fluffy white clouds outside, jostling each other in the sky.  Sometimes they turn to rabbit-fur grey and blot out the sun.  The air gets cold, a breeze springs up to chill your arms and tangle your hair.  Sometimes the curling clouds drift apart to show blue sky between, the sun breaks out and shines down and suddenly its high summer, warm, bright and beautiful.  The black plastic drainpipes click and creak as they heat up and expand.  Birds sing.  Flowers open their petals and shiver in sun-kissed delight. 

We all remember how much we love the summer.

Then the fells let go of their hold and clouds stream down the valley again to mask the light and cool our ardour.

That’s rather how I feel at the moment.  A little happy, a little sad.  Content and then anxious.  Laughing and then tearful.

Not extremes of ups and down, but little moments of shade and then warming glow.

It’s the same day, in the same space.  But the weather’s changeable.

Cover scene?

Thursday, July 12th, 2007

I’m still way too excited about Medallion Press working on my cover.  In celebration of that fact, let me give you an (unedited) excerpt of the scene they’re thinking of basing the cover on.

Jenny has been Kier’s prisoner in a lonely Scottish longhouse for several days.  She makes a break for freedom through the pine plantation surrounding them…

Run Among Thorns – Excerpt

Jenny clutched at the rough bark of a young sitka spruce, and tried not to make too much noise breathing.

The silence of the forest was oppressive.  It seemed to catch sounds and swallow them, so that even the ragged sound of her breathing was pressed down on, and subdued.

Still, she tried to regulate it, because the hammering of her heart in her ears was deafening her, and she couldn’t hear if she was being pursued.

Feeling sticky resin against her palm, she lifted her hand and absently rubbed it down her leg.  It was much darker here under the dark shroud of sweeping boughs, and Jenny waited for her eyes to adjust.  With a sinking feeling, she realised she could see very little, only a sense of deeper and shallower shadows.

She took a deep breath, and squared her shoulders.  Her heart quieting, she could hear nothing else but the light whisper of a breeze among the tops of the trees, and her own breathing.  Not a sound of someone charging after her, on the ground littered with dry, sharp twigs.

The sharp pine scent, mellowed by the smell of damp earth was all around her, and she welcomed it, because it was so different from the last few days.  It was true, incontrovertible evidence she was out and away.  In the dark.  Alone.

She tightened her hands into fists, fingernails digging painfully into her flesh.  Dear Lord, what has he done to me?  She used to be capable, unflappable, unafraid.  Alone in a dark forest at night used to be an adventure, not an ordeal.

Her fear was out there, though, stalking her like a living thing moving among the trees.  Intangible, incorporeal.  There was also a man out there, probably, hunting her down as well.  But the man didn’t scare her half as much as the faceless spectre of her own emotional self, conspiring against the mind God gave her, to bring her down, body and soul.  Jenny closed her eyes to it, closed her mind to it, and concentrated.

She knew the trees were planted in rigid rows, and that she stood facing in the direction the rows ran.  She put her hand out again to the sticky tree, and stepped away from it, until only her fingertips grazed the bark.  Her feet dipped down into the shallow ditch between rows, springy with years of slow-rotting pine needles.  Here, looking straight ahead, the darkness was more silvered with moonlight, percolating through the branches overhead.  Jenny could see the trees as shadowed sentinels either side of a gap about six feet wide, unobstructed but for a few stray low boughs reaching tentatively across the void.  Glancing once over her shoulder, she tried to pierce the darkness behind her and see her enemy.  There was no-one there.

She started to run.

Slowly, at first, then gaining more momentum as she found her footing more easily.  The soft ground muffled her footfalls, but she tried her best to miss the tell-tale little firecracker twigs that would snap loud, and ricochet like a rifle shot around the woods.  They were just visible as an interruption of the texture of the carpet of needles, like the protuberant roots that were waiting to trip her.

Her breath, after her first initial rush to the trees, was steadying, coming easier.  Muscles, for days in forced idleness, stretched and flexed, waking to work as if nothing unruly had happened in the interim.  The heady mixture of adrenalin and exercise fizzed in her blood, and her spirits rose.

She’d not been running long when she came to an open ride.  It slashed through the forest, straight as a die, a silvered, grassy track, lying across her path like a wide river.  Pushing through the bushes at the edge of the ride, Jenny paused, still in shadow, listening for sounds of pursuit.  Heaving air into her protesting lungs.

There were none, and she turned, straining her eyes, searching through the tree trunks that barred her vision.  Still no sign.  Starting to relax, she was turning back when she saw something out the corner of her eye.  It was only a shimmer of movement, a distant shadow slipping between the dark trees, a moment’s blurring of the forests stark lines.  It could have been anything.  But it sent her hurtling out and across the ride, bursting through into the trees on the other side as if the hounds of hell were after her.

She picked another clear row and ran on, every sense alive, reaching for any hint of pursuit.  When it came, it stopped her dead in her tracks.

A loud crack of dry wood, cutting through the silence of the forest as viciously as a chainsaw.  The sound echoed round the trees, divorced from a direction.  For a moment Jenny hesitated, trying to sense which way to run.  Pinned in a second’s indecision, panicking, she guessed he must be coming straight from the cottage, from her left.  Wheeling, she picked a clear row on her right, that sloped away downhill, and set off again.

An unseen branch whipped her cheek, the stinging pain bringing tears to her eyes and forcing her to bite down on her lip, hard, to stop from crying out.  She pressed on, her arm held up in front of her to ward off another blow.

Jenny knew she was nearing the end of her strength.  Her legs hurt, her back ached from bending under the branches and her lungs were burning, a tight knot of pain in her chest.  She wasn’t thinking beyond the moment anymore, only concentrating on staying upright and keeping moving.  Don’t fall over, don’t fall over.

She tried to jump a twisted root but misjudged it, tripping and sprawling on a tangle of old broken branches.  Through the rising panic she was aware of sharp stabs of pain in her side and leg, but with a ragged, sobbing breath she threw herself to her feet again and kept on.  Her knees were rubbery now, though, her vision starting to blur.

Through the thunder of her heart and blood, she was straining her ears for sounds of pursuit.  All thought of keeping quiet had gone, she was just trying to get away, get away.  Her feet pounded on the forest floor.

Something big leapt at her from out of the trees on the right, colliding with her side with bruising force and knocking her clean off her feet.  She screamed, but the sound was broken off as they hit the trunk of a tree together, and ricocheted off it.  In the same split-second, the sense of solid heat, frightening speed and looming power resolved itself into the recognisable form of McAllister.

She landed on top of him, feeling rather than hearing the breath go out of him in a whoosh.  She bucked and jerked, trying to get free.  But hands closed on her in a hard grip, and he rolled her beneath him, using his weight to press her into the ground and pin her down.

She struggled for breath, hemmed in and crushed and overwhelmed.  What she had intended as a shout came out in a thin, pathetic thread of a voice, and she hated it.  “Get off me!”

She dragged in another painful breath.  “Get off me!”  she screamed, and her voice echoed across the hillside, barely muffled by the trees.  She swore at him, hysterical and desperate, but all he did was rear back off her, dragging her to her feet by his grip on her wrists.  He swung her back out from under the tree, spun her round and took a grip of her jumper at the back of her neck.

“Move,” he said, using that hand to push her forward back the way she’d come.She didn’t co-operate.

She pulled forward, jerking on the grip at her nape, threw herself backwards, using her weight to make him stumble, shouted and screamed at him with what breath she had.  Once she snapped a dead branch off a tree and tried to hit him with it, but he jabbed at the back of her knees with his own, making them buckle, and calmly twisted the branch out of her hand.

When they broke free from the cover of the trees she was conscious of a sense of relief to be out in the open again.  But then she saw the cottage, seeming so peaceful down by the beck, and threatening her with everything she’d tried to escape.

She gave way to the pain in her legs and sank to the ground, resisting his attempts to pull her up again.  She was all out of everything.  Hope, courage, sense.  Her heart and soul were long gone, and had a terrifying feeling she knew who’s custody she’d given them into.

Swearing under his breath, McAllister bent and lifted her bodily, hoisting her over his shoulder.  He shifted her once, to get balance, the solid breadth of his shoulder digging into her abdomen.  He wrapped one arm like a hard band across the backs of her thighs and set off.

Jenny suddenly had an upended view of his long legs and jeans clad backside, moving as he walked.  She closed her eyes.  He’d flung her over the shoulder like a sack of grain.

Outraged and well beyond any self-imposed control, she reached down and bit him on the backside, hard as she could through denim.

He yelped and Jenny clutched at him for balance as he swung her down again.  He shook her by the shoulders.  “There is a time and a place for that sort of play, Jenny, and it is not now,” he ended on a shout.

“Get a grip, Jenny,”  he said.  “You’re losing it.”

It was the last straw.

“Isn’t that what you want?” she gasped.  “Isn’t that what you want!”

He jerked back from her as she shrieked, hands dropping to his sides.  Sobbing for breath through trembling fingers pressed to her mouth, Jenny looked up at him.

The moonlight caught his face.  It was stark and breathtakingly beautiful.  But it wasn’t that which shocked her into silence, although it made her stomach turn clean over, it was the anguish imprinted in every harsh line.

Jenny cried, then, so far gone off the end of her tether, she didn’t even know in what direction to reach for it.  She covered her face with her hands and sobbed.  Her knees buckled, and she would have fallen, but he caught her.  This time the heat and strength of him was a comfort and a balm, something solid to hold onto.

He scooped her up in his arms again, cradling her like a child against his chest, and set off across the heather to the cottage.

Business as Usual

Thursday, July 12th, 2007

Captain Carrot, from Terry Pratchett’s Discworld series, has been known to say, “personal is not the same as important.”  In many ways I think he’s right.  So I’m setting aside some time on Sunday to deal with the personal, and until then I need to focus on the important!

(I’ve you’re one of the lovely people who sent me an e-mail, THANK YOU!  I have something over 100 e-mails in my inbox I will be responding to, but not just yet!  Please bear with me.)

The important stuff includes some exciting news, so hold on to your hats and I’ll do you a quick run through the tidbits..

Cover News!

Medallion Press are currently working on the cover for my first book, Run Among Thorns!  I was contacted by the talented Adam Mock, Vice President and Creative Director, who wanted to iron out some details of Jenny, the heroine’s, appearance and clothing in a particular scene so that he could hire the right cover model.  Oh come on, how cool is that??  And now I know what scene they’re going to show on the cover.  My toes are curling with glee…

On The Radio!

When I stop and think about this, I shall be extremely nervous.  Tomorrow, between 10am and 12noon our time, I’m going to be joining Ian Timms on BBC Radio Cumbria, for a whole programme devoted to romantic fiction in the 21st Century!  I came off the motorway on my way home yesterday to have a chat with Andrew, the producer, about what we could cover (when he first called me, he said it sounded like I was doing warp speed on the M6.  He wasn’t far wrong).  It sounds like we’re going to have a lot of fun, inviting the listeners to get involved in crafting the first lines of a new romantic novel!

Now, it doesn’t look like Ian’s show is on ‘Listen Again’ so if you are around tomorrow morning with nothing better to do, you should be able to catch the show if you go to BBC Radio Cumbria and click on the Listen Live link, over on the right, under the red logo.

Wish me luck!

Workshopping 9 to 5

And what I’m doing for the rest of today is finalising the details for Saturday’s The Write Read.  The Write Read is an event for readers and writers, run by the Cumbria Library Service as a part of the Pure Passion Promotion.

 So on Saturday I’ll be doing my first ever talk as a published author!  I have two things going on:
Workshop – A Sense of Place – Using setting in your story
The place we are in has a profound impact on how we feel, how we relate to our surroundings and to each other. The same goes for our characters. Find out how to use setting to develop characterisation, build tension and reveal emotion – without loading down your manuscript with descriptive text.

Talk – How not to do it
In six years of writing seriously, Anna made just about every mistake there is to make… and then landed a publishing contract. Enjoy this light-hearted talk (with plenty of chance for questions) as Anna turns her writing journey so far into a cautionary tale.

So I have a question for you writers out there:

1)  What’s the silliest mistake you’ve ever made in writing for publication?

And for the readers among us:

2)  What was the last book you read with a really memorable setting – and what made it memorable?

I might use your answers as examples, but I’ll keep it anonymous!

PS.  Just so you understand the writer’s life is not exciting all the time – in fact, hardly ever! – I should explain I’m typing this in my ratty faded dressing-gown, pre-shower, with damp cats walking back and forth across my desk, leaving wet paw prints, and a cloud of moulting hairs…  Oh, the writer’s life…

Dad

Monday, July 9th, 2007

Dad died on Friday, at about 3pm. 

 How do you go about actually adding to that statement?  I can tell you that he was at home, that he went peacefully, that we were all there.  On Wednesday he’d gone out with Mum, P-J, and some long-term and much-loved friends of the family to visit a preservation railway, ride on a steam train, and ogle an American loco he’s long had a passion for (a consolidation, coincidentally my first childhood model train).  As he went to bed that night, he said to Mum, “Oh, I’ve had a wonderful day.”

On Thursday morning, he felt much worse, and by the time the doctor was there, he was unconscious.  He didn’t regain consciousness, gradually worsened, and died without fuss on Friday afternoon.

 On Saturday we worked in the garden and met with the undertaker.  On Sunday we went to church, and out for a Sunday lunch.  We laughed, we cried, we talked.  A lot.  We’ve got a fair bit of that still to do.

 But back in November we were given a gift.  We were told Dad was going to die.  We’ve spent time together, holidayed together, told each other how much we love each other.  We’ve all had serious conversations with Dad about the past and about the future.  Dad made plans, left instructions and recorded his life story.  So many people are snatched away suddenly, without warning.  We didn’t have to suffer that. 

Let me leave you with a picture of Dad just 48 hours before he died.  It’s a keeper.

Dad’s Cloud

Leicester is More

Wednesday, July 4th, 2007

Off to the RNA Conference at Leicester!

Well, I’m visiting The Parentals either side of it.

Back Tuesday!

Leaving you with, Disturbing announcements in the bedroom #1

“I’m not taking my socks off, you know.”

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